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제 목 THE FISHISLAND
교정강사 Agnes(C)
등록일 2021-06-30
작성글 It is comfortable on our fishy island but today something smelled fishy. The ground begone to tremble and then our wonderful island was moving a most weird way. I was scared that there was a earth quack but it was different. I realized that I was riding a giant fish. I was kind of surprised because I lived in the island for years. So I planed to escape from this stinky place so I swam to the lake and make a grand escape. I was glad that I could live in a better place but I heard a smashing sound when I was swimming so I turned around and saw a big fish coming right at me! I thought I was in the heaven but I wasn’t dead the gold fish didn’t even squished me.
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It is ​feels comfortable on our fishy island, but today something smelled fishy. The ground began​ to tremble and then our wonderful island moved the weirdest way. I was scared that there was an earthquake, but it was different. I realized that I was riding a giant fish. I was kind of surprised because I lived in the island for years. So I planed to escape from this stinky place, so I swam to the lake and made a grand escape. I'm glad that I could live in a better place but I heard a smashing sound when I was swimming so I turned around and saw a big fish coming right at me! I thought I was in the heaven but I wasn’t dead. The gold fish didn’t even squish me. 

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