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제 목 If you were to speak in the General Debate, what would your speech be?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2021-10-20
작성글 A.) If you were to speak in the General Debate, what would your speech be? Please elaborate your answer.

Space doesn't belong to a country.
No country could dominate it.
Recently some countries compete with each other to develop space, which might lead to contamination.
So I would like to speak in the General Debate about the problem .

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(10/18/21)

-그녀는 너무 자기 중심적이야.
She is too selfish.

-잠시 쉬고 재충전하려고요.
I will take a rest for a while to recharge myself.

-그냥 음악적 재능을 타고난 거 같아요.
I just seem to have been born with musical talent
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​A.) If you were to speak in the General Debate, what would your speech be? Please elaborate your answer.

 

Space doesn't  belong  to  a country.  No country could dominate it.  Recently,  some countries compete with each other to develop space, which might lead to contamination.  So I would like to speak in the General Debate about  the problem . ✔

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/18/21)

 

-그녀는 너무 자기 중심적이야.

 She is too selfish. ✔​

 

-잠시 쉬고 재충전하려고요.

  I  will  take a rest for a while  to  recharge myself. ✔​

 

-그냥 음악적 재능을 타고난 거 같아요.

 I just seem to have been born with musical talent.

​=> I was just born with a talent for music.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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