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제 목 Writing my English story 3
교정강사 Gen(C)
등록일 2022-03-02
작성글 I mixed water and oil but I couldn’t do it.
I want to have healthy body.
I don’t want to play active game.
Do not dig our garden.
I like simple style of clothses.
I have my view on this meeting.
Many insects are eaten by birds.
I am so sleepy.
What is the root of this problem.
A total of 10 people buy it.
I won the soccer in the finals.
Look at the movie scene.
Give me the prize. I won the game.
I don’t like my new nickname.
Don’t touch the pan. It is very hot.
I usually watch a cartoon at night.
I want to be a leader of our club.
The coach is giving sign to the player.
I found out where your money is it.
I help you when you were in trouble.
교정내용

I mixed water and oil but I couldn’t do it. ✔

I want to have a healthy body.

 

I don’t want to play active games.

 

Do not dig our garden.✔​

 

I like simple style of clothses. ✔​ ---> clothes

I have my view on this meeting. ✔​

 

Many insects are eaten by birds.✔​

 

I am so sleepy.✔​

 

What is the root of this problem?.✔​ (Punctuation)​

 

A total of 10 people buy it. ✔​

 

I won the soccer game/match in the finals. 

Look at the movie scene✔​

 

Give me the prize. I won the game.✔

I don’t like my new nickname. ✔

Don’t touch the pan. It is very hot. ✔

I usually watch a cartoon show/movie at night.

I want to be a leader of our club.✔

The coach is giving sign to the player.✔​

 

I found out where your money is it.---> I found out where your money is.

I helped you when you were in trouble.​

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