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제 목 Would you like to visit Craigievar Castle?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-01-29
작성글 A.) Would you like to visit Craigievar Castle? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

The Craigievar Castle is famous for its wall covering style known as a lime-based harling.
Those who major in architecture would need to go there.
But although I am not an architecture, I have no reason to reject it if I have a chance to visit Craigievar Castle in Scotland, .

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(01/26/24)

1. 그것은 저희가 찾는 가격대가 아닙니다.
It is beyond the price level which we are looking for.

2. 귀사의 경쟁사들은 훨씬 더 낮은 가격을 제시하고 있습니다.
Your competitors are proposing a much lower price.

3. 저희 제품의 품질을 감안하면 적정한 가격이라고 생각합니다.
Considering our product's quality, it is a reasonable price.
교정내용

​A.) Would you like to visit Craigievar Castle? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Craigievar Castle is famous for its wall covering  style known as  a lime-based harling.

Those who major in architecture would need to go there. 

But although I am not an architecture, I have no reason to reject it if I have a chance to visit Craigievar Castle in Scotland, .

 

=>  The Craigievar Castle is famous for its wall covering style known as a lime-based harling.

Those who major in architecture would need to go there. 

But although I am not an architect, I have no reason to reject it if I have a chance to visit Craigievar Castle in Scotland.

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/26/24)

 

1. 그것은 저희가 찾는 가격대가 아닙니다.

It is beyond the price level which we are looking for.  ✔️

​2. 귀사의 경쟁사들은 훨씬 더 낮은 가격을 제시하고 있습니다.

Your competitors are proposing a much lower price.  ✔️

​3. 저희 제품의 품질을 감안하면 적정한 가격이라고 생각합니다.

Considering our product's quality, it is a reasonable price.  ✔️

 

​•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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